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Jealousy, was my curse, when I heard
Your voice and hers
And it changed my mind

Romance, it seemed like I had no chance
But just once
I wanted something that wasn't nothing
Normal by definition is nothin' that I’m given
Frustration, was just another complication.
Until
I changed my mind

One song and I listen to it once again
One look down the path I’ve always took
What can I say? Everything miles away,
It changed my mind.

The sun, it hasn't shined
Since half past nine.
And its 4:02
Hours ago I felt so low
What could I do? Thinking of you?
I changed my mind.

Sing to me again,
Wait until the end
I’ve felt this way
For many days
Love me
Or change my mind.
©2007-2009 ~kel-bug
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Author's Comments

This was really fun to write. i would really like your opinions and how you interpret it. :D

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:iconpinktinfoil:
ooo ooo it's the song...I like it very much!
i love the line about "love me or change my mind" it speaks volumes to me right now

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The writer is by nature a dreamer---a concious dreamer.
:iconcomfortable-with-me:
i heart your writting a lot!!! I would love to read more of it.. anywho.. this one.

I really like it. It gives me goosebumps just reading it! Its so powerful. I love the same line as her ^ Its simple words, but such an amazing message.
I love the begining as well...
"Jealousy, was my curse, when I heard
Your voice and hers
And it changed my mind"
It makes perfect sense and is just.. wonderful. cheers!! :love:

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If today I love you, tomorrow I'll hate you, so where does that leave us yesterday?
:iconsupastar000spiderman:
Just one tiny OCD on Ciara's part, it should be taken, not took. Bad grammar.

But otherwise, me gusta mucho. Very understandable and lots of people (excepting me!) can probably relate to it.

And I am still almost dying tonight. I think I'll be dying tomorrow too. Grrrr.

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What's the first thing you remember after all the things you've forgotten?
:iconkel-bug:
but taken doesnt rhyme with look. :D
and who says that we need good grammer, psh. haha
:iconsupastar000spiderman:
Right. I say that lots of times. I actually didn't notice that it was supposed to rhyme. Go me.

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What's the first thing you remember after all the things you've forgotten?

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